PLOT-Chronological Scenes

3 Cycles

CHRONOLOGICAL SCENE Skeleton (WHAT ABOUT 3 act structure of TALE?)

Cycle One

WOMAN growing up

BROTHER bipolar signs

Incest & Games

Swimming

Age 14/Age 17

Brother Drowns? Hospital/Mental Institution/JAIL!!!

Cycle Two-BROTHER REAPPEARS & DROWNS (again)

He returns to her life

Writes letters

Imposter?

She visits him at hospital

Suit notices her doing this

She begins to Swim from Kendall to Walden

She takes her brother out, to visit Mental Institution in NH!!

Swim river-He tries to kill her & he disappears!!

(Suit is watching, tries to kill her there?  

Tries to kidnap her?

He kills brother? Dumps him in river?

SHE HAS TREMENDOUS GUILT!!

Starts swimming in ponds, looking to get arrested??

CHARACTERS
Woman grown up

Little Girl 9

DH/Dogs/Group Home

JOB Intro & End

(METAL/GLASS/CONCRETE)

SUIT Intro

WOMAN swimming

WOMAN swimming the Sapphire River/Lucinda (GUILT?? Or wondering if he ever really left)

COP sees her-she wants to be arrested

BROTHER lives in forest? (How does he know about abduction of WOMAN?)

CYCLE THREE- WOMAN Disappears

Little Girl/Cop/Suit/Mutton Chops sitting at Computer

Suit displays program-tracking software

Little Girl switches tracking device from WOMAN’s car to SUIT

Litle Girl at Funeral

Mutton Chops discovers her BROTHER was in Jail/incest (he’s reading WOMAN’s diary?)

Mutton Chops/Kid/Cop drive to Atlanta (or NH?)

Find where she was being kept, evidence of SUIT’s house

but she is gone?

Or she attacks COP?  Mutton Chops?  (Does she kill him?)

Or BROTHER saves her?

(SCENE-Do you remember when we used to play Superman?/I forgot where your words ended and mine began.  You could always read my mind)

SUIT comes back to face both of them

BROTHER hiding in shadows unknown to him

Cop car comes half an hour too late?

No, cop takes credit for the kill?

Leave Brother out of it

Let him go be a Mountain Man
Resolution: Shores of WALDEN
"Come on in, the water;s fine"